@nadesamasetim don't feel bad for what i am going to say... You do have lots of talent in writing but what u need to concentrate is whatever u are updating is it correct in spelling wise I can understand about grammer n it's fine with me. But the thing u write let it correct na.
And ur storyline, without any doubt u know what u want in story and the story context but Sry to say u need u analysis that what u want to write (the idea) atleast it's 60-70 is coming on paper. I guess execution wise you are lacking. You are good but you their is journey from becoming good, better, best just look for the best. You are good with ideas, story, suspense is good but what are thinking is lacking in words. A reader can understand what you want to express. Hope u understand what I am saying.
Hopefully u don't take it personally. Just to help you.