Hi, for some reason I wasn't able to comment last night as the app wasn't letting me, but I had finished reading the two chapters. Had forgotten to vote and then voted them and omg, I can't explain how much I was bought to tears upon reading all that happens to the protagonist. I'm really sorry I'm still crying as all those scenarios in your story are running through my mind right now, because I could feel the pain she went through and cannot imagine how much she had to go through more and more because it's happened to her.
You Armandie Scholtz, have a beautiful way of storytelling as you have found those right strings that could tie in and feel the emotions that the protagonist of your book faces.
I'm a sensitive person and I'm an emotional person so, whichever story I read and I find it interesting, it just makes me read and read and want to read for more and more to know ehat happens to the characters and in ways I end up feeling every emotions that the protagonists go through. I wanna sum this up by saying that if you're going to continue this story and turn this into a masterpiece Novel with so many chapters to sum up this protagonist's story as she battles her way out of those monsters and their den, someday I definitely see this being made into a movie or a series that would take people by storm.
If you're taking Reading requests, I would like to recommend my story "Magneta", which I have completed and published all 95 Chapters. It's a story about Love, Pain, Betrayal, Heartbreak, Deceit, Fear and Loss as it is a beautiful tragic Romantic Thriller-Mystery that had gotten me so inside the story as I had felt every feeling and emotions of the characters while writing this story. I really hope that you are going to love this.
It would make my Day if you'd read this and vote every chapter as it would help my hardwork to get recognized. Thankyou so much.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/257668019-magneta
