LLMontez
Hello! Thank you so much for those stars! I really appreciate them. Hope you’ve enjoyed Janika’s journey so far and continue through her trails in HMS VALEDICTION. ❤️⭐️
Mike_I_am
Hey, thanks so much for reading and voting on Hawk, hope you're enjoying the story :)
TechieInAK
Hey! Noticed you've been making your way though The Descent. Just wanted to say thank you for reading and don't hesitate to let me know if you see something I could do better.
Robert_Bennet
Hi, I see you are power reading my stories, glad you are enjoying them, thank you. I would love to know what you think, please drop me a critique, thanks again.
Robert_Bennet
I am enjoying this, I am graduate student of history and after writing so many papers within specified formats and requirements if feels great to just to write.
Armerd
@Robert_Bennet different strokes for different folks. It is an impossible task to please everyone. What is important, is the simple fact it is your work, and you must be happy with it. In all honesty I am really enjoying reading it regardless of any critique I may or may not have. As before keep up the good work.
Robert_Bennet
@Armerd Thank you very much for the review, It seems no matter how many times I reviewed my story prior to publishing, I still end up picking out the grammatical errors every time I read it. You comment about fleshing out the story is interesting. I added background were I thought it was needed to support the path the story was taking. But I noticed half my readers did not go beyond the first chapter on Earth and became concerned that perhaps I was getting to wordy.
Robert_Bennet
Again, thank you all the votes, glad you are enjoying the story.
Robert_Bennet
Hi and thank you for adding my stories to your reading list and the votes.
TonyHarmsworth
Thanks for adding MINDSLIP to your reading list. I hope you enjoy it. My other SF novel is THE VISITOR which is about a female astronaut who finds an ancient alien artefact in low-Earth orbit.
Best,
Tony
Alva_Eriksson
Thank you for your votes!