Arnie Calicos

Hey! I really need feedback on my WIP "Dandelion's Bite". Just two short chapters so far! Would really appreciate it!

Hey buddy!
          
          I hope you are doing well.
          
          Apologies for sliding into your profile, but do check out my story if time permits. It will mean a lot!❤️
          
          The story is complete and is more on a realistic side, which hopefully you will connect to!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/262286159?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Ruhani_Gupta&wp_originator=Yi%2FcgRspTueatuHNLbVqL%2FtyKkNN%2F15VdXbrALLpYb%2FjEHseA0nhP%2FSH1b%2B71qszUv4ukxJMp3YQV%2FH%2BB4%2BeEZZpmUKoMDwlMBNzbnK8Y%2BqK8YbjhwnB2N6pp0VP%2FIFK,p 
          
          

It is a darkkk romance:)
          Hey sorry for uploading without permission but try reading my story and if possible do vote and comment if you want to see their edits please check them out on my page <3 @__purplesky12
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/341284299?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_purplesky12&wp_originator=LpbQQbwtkXk5XAOF5dMH5QlAZ2Ij%2FpbE6%2FzxxrMoyD86yS8z6G7MQjMWEmNRtaEjcnL34XGRqPXOu%2BLUmmjc3mlxgDuoaR2%2BQfIukh%2FnF3eUBg%2BXClmJJQWk1eqzuJ9y

Hey,
          I hope you're doing fine. I am here to request you to check out my books
          •Halat
          •Warm Love
          in your leisure. If you like it do vote, share and comment. It will really mean a lot to me.
          Thank you.

Hello, I'm Ashleigh Wilkes, the author of Karma. I started writing because I was fed up of weak, doormat women characters who take back their cheating exes. My books were plagarised and I deleted my account.
          
          I am back with a new account after a long break. I'm rewriting Karma, and have written a new cheating book, I Still Love You, But, recently completed.
          
          Thank you for reading this.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/285731070-karma
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/279200871-i-still-love-you-but

@paperandpen545 I have my uni exams, I'll do it once after I'm done with them 

Hi. Hope you're well.
          Can you please give my book a try. If you got time. 
          It's called Edge of sunshine. It's medical romance story.
          It'd mean a lot ❤
          Stay happy and healthy ❤

Hi
          If ur time permit do read my book journey of life
          If u like ❤ then plz vote n comment
          https://my.w.tt/vq0DC3vL75
          Ur suggestion or criticism is always welcome
          Thanks...