Artemis998766

Only if you read my story Eternity!!! I'll comment and stuff, can't wait!!!

vicky_nfs

Hey!
          I just thought I'd stop by to let you know that I uploaded a short story yesterday. Wattpad didn't send the notification email and some people didn't get the message I broadcasted to my fans either. 
          
          It's a short story, named "Letters to be told", and supposed to be sad.  In my opinion, it's different from most stories on here., (in a good way, I hope) It's only 6 pages long, so really not that time-consuming. 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/669742-letters-to-be-told
          
          Since I've had a hard time working on it, I'd love to know what you think. 
          have a nice day/evening, 
          ~Vicky

Amethystgirl207

I love your name Artemis, why i really dont know ever since i read the Percy Jackson series, i loved The mane  Artemis. So one day i planing to name my son or daughter Artemis.
          
          I know i'm a random person
          
          So i was wondering if you could read my story
          Im a werewolf and he's an alpha what else can go wrong?(Complete)Book 1 and , I'm his mate, and He's our alpha (book 2), please give me feedback
          
          Bare with me if theer are some mistake

vicky_nfs

Hey! 
          Just a quick/small suggestion, maybe you could put the first few parts of "Eternity" together? I don't know. I just think people would like it better. And I like the way you write. It somehow reads like a poem :) Well, that's my opinion LOL
          ~Vicky

vicky_nfs

I'd love to think my other stuff is worth reading LOL If you should read my story, well, don't give up on it based in the first chapters. It was my first story ever, it was the first time I wrote something in my life and it's not even in my first language LOL But I think the story isn't that bad, of course I'm biased, but  since it has quite some reads and votes and stuff I think it might be worth your time :)
          And my other poems...well, I don't think they're bad :D depends on what type of poetry you like :) But yeah...I'd say give it a try and let me know what you think :D

vicky_nfs

So I read your poems, they were all really good! the only thing I could say is that maybe you could space them up, make paragraphs...But that may be personal preferences :)I'm going to read "Eternity" tomorrow since it's 3am and I'm falling asleep :)
          talk to you tomorrow!
          ~Vicky

vicky_nfs

Yuk! I did not want to be reminded of swallowing bugs and spiders. It maes me want to wear a mouth mask when I go to sleep LOL
          and haha...I think my type speed is now up to 1 or 2 words every minute. Typing in the dark, when you're ly down and type with one hand isn't that easy haha :)
          Going to read your work now :)

vicky_nfs

Hey Elizabeth!
          First of all: thanks for becoming a friend. 
          Secondly: thanks for reading/voting/commenting!
          
          random facts about me? Last night, I was up late writing on my story, there crawled a spider over my arm! So I jumped out of bed an dnearly killed my laptop in the process LOL. You guessed it, I  don't really like spiders and especially not the ones that dare to crawl on me...yuk!!! *shivers* Uhm what else...I like glow in the dark stars, oh, and those bracelets you have to break and then they give light for a few hours. I don't like milkshakes but love ice cream. I like my cereal mushy. I hate  lightning, but love the thinder. I always laugh at my laptop screen, or just any other screen, like when I'm watching a movie at home or in the cinema. I even have a smile on my face when I read a book. I don't cry when I see a sad movie, but  I do cry when I read sad books. I haven't been to the hairdresser for 2 years now, but you don't really notice because my hair is long and curly (the reason why I didn't go yet is because the last time they cut off way too much!) so yeah...
          Lots of random stuff lol
          I'm going to read your work in an hour or so, but I'm going to warn you. I suck at commenting when it comes to poetry! 
          have a nice day/evening and thanks again!
          ~Vicky