Articshawn

The story is really good , the bar has been set high already with the first chapter just keep going up . good luck 
          success

@JamesG4briel  Hello. I'm good. How are you?
          Love the title , it already gives off a vibe to me.
          You speak portugese nice I would love to see some portugese words you know. I speak dutch but love to write in english.
          So you said riding but wandering the streets would be better
          
          i don't get the part where the voice says that it wants her goods, but that is why it actually  fits because people will wonder what is meant by her goods.
          
          lucy saw the last sentence had been torn off