The syllable count in every poem of 'Suicide' is terrible. The words are okay, nothing very impressive, but your lack of flow in those poems deterred me from ever reading your works again. When your poems rhyme, you must match the syllable count in every line, or close to it. Simple as that.
And just so you know, I am fully aware that many of your supporters, maybe you yourself, will now leave disparaging comments on my own poems. Go right ahead, as others have done. Just know that I strive not for hate, but for honesty.