Hey I checked out your newest book and got to say it’s pretty good that you didn’t do the sort thing many new readers me included doing the Izuku Yagi route
But the only thing I got to say is that try to make your books longer and don’t do massive time skips that would make many people not read your books knowing that they could read it in five minutes or less
Maybe try to limit yourself to either 2,000 words or 3,000 words because from what I found out people tend to like long chapters but even if some are short just know that if you do make short chapters try to make them detailed
So all I have to say is try to bring up your words to 2,000 words just as practice and if you feel like you can go further go to 3,000 words
That is how I got started with my books I went from 3,000 words to sometimes writing chapters that are 10,000 words
Keep up the good work my friend:)
