ArturArtur919

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Fuck, why did I read this? I haven't even finished the manga yet, but I fucking want to start smoking (I've never smoked) and commit suicide. Fuck, this is so disgusting, but there's something special about this manga.

ArturArtur919

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Fuck, why did I read this? I haven't even finished the manga yet, but I fucking want to start smoking (I've never smoked) and commit suicide. Fuck, this is so disgusting, but there's something special about this manga.

specimen1188

if you do wanna talk to know a little more than the other people reading dogday2006's stuff send me your discord name.

ArturArtur919

@specimen1188 No one can make a plot I have an idea but I am zero in plot
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ArturArtur919

@specimen1188 And Dabi Izuku was 4 years older than his sister, mom and dad constantly wanted fame and money, and so they had a plan to grow up to be the future number one, Izuku has a powerful fire quirk that gets hotter every second, but His body can't handle the heat and his parents say he's trash when he sees that Izumi has a quirk of telekinesis and fire, half green hair and eyes and half red hair and blue eyes. He begins to have a nervous breakdown and gradually when Izumi turned 4 years old all the suspicions were confirmed in Izumi 2 the quirky Izuku is so sad and desperate that he goes to the forest to train and can not Put out his fire he screams mom dad help me I don't want to die in the end he finds all for one and after 3 years Izuku woke up Izuku had red hair and blue eyes but because of stress hair They turned white when he returned, he noticed that everyone was having fun, eating and joking as if he didn't exist, and at that moment, Dabi, the product of revenge and hatred, was born from the ashes.
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specimen1188

@ArturArtur919 tad bit morbid, also I'm not the exact scenario chooser. I have zero control of what goes in the stories(unless he asks for an OC)
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paperweight04

Hey I checked out your newest book and got to say it’s pretty good that you didn’t do the sort thing many new readers me included doing the Izuku Yagi route
          
          But the only thing I got to say is that try to make your books longer and don’t do massive time skips that would make many people not read your books knowing that they could read it in five minutes or less
          
          Maybe try to limit yourself to either 2,000 words or 3,000 words because from what I found out people tend to like long chapters but even if some are short just know that if you do make short chapters try to make them detailed
          
          So all I have to say is try to bring up your words to 2,000 words just as practice and if you feel like you can go further go to 3,000 words
          
          That is how I got started with my books I went from 3,000 words to sometimes writing chapters that are 10,000 words
          
          Keep up the good work my friend:)

ArturArtur919

@paperweight04 thank you very much for the advice
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