Aryan Mehan

Hello! If you have time it would be nice if I could get feedback on my story and also please tell me if you enjoy it. I wanna try to make this story good so your feedback with definitely help. Thank you for your time.

If possible please try and read my new book and give me any feedback. 

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          I made some changes to chapter 1 attempting to make it more "humorous (depends how funny you find it )" and taking in all of your advice. I also added paragraphing to make it more clear. Hope you read it and  hopefully it is funny. Thanks!

Creative, Awesome, and interesting story Aryan_14. I hop you create a chapter 3. Does he also get other sorts of abilities

Aryan if you want I can make a personalized cover for your book. I know how to do it. it's gonna be really awesome, trust me.