ArzTheBookWorm

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@Anti_Spiral Yeah, of course.

@ArzTheBookWorm I'll try to adopt the idea when I'm writing next time.
            Btw thanks for the guide

@Anti_Spiral Okay, so the first thing I will talk about is style. The style you write in doesn't have clear paragraphs or sections, and is unappealing to the eye. I would add in more punctuation, or try to group things more definitively. 
            In terms of story, I think since this is a fantasy about knights, you could take advantage of things written previously. Like The Round Table, Don Quijote, Narnia, etc.

@ArzTheBookWorm It's all right, my story isn't fully demon slayer. It just has demon slayer characters but it's set up in a knight theme au 

@AnimeDrive14 I have watched the first season, but am not currently up to speed.