AshTheDreamChaser

Chapter 7 of The Fairest of Them All is out.
          	Check it at
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/390010469-the-fairest-of-them-all

Sumantha2007

Hey,
          
          I came across your book Fairest of Them All and absolutely loved the concept. I was wondering if you'd be okay with me writing a similar story. Of course, not based on Snow White, but inspired by a different Disney princess. Your idea really sparked something for me. I’d be happy to give you credit for the inspiration if you’re comfortable with that. Let me know what you think!

Sumantha2007

@AshTheDreamChaser alright, thank you!
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AshTheDreamChaser

@Sumantha2007 Hi. I'm glad you liked it. Go ahead, I'd love to see what you come up. One thing though - my story is based on the original Grimm fairytale, not the Disney version :)
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ripv4nwinkle

hi!! are you up for r4r? (:

AshTheDreamChaser

@ripv4nwinkle Thank you! I hope you'll like at least one of my works :D
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ripv4nwinkle

thank you for this. i was just trying to build the context with the first two chapters, there’s a lot more coming further along the story. but i appreciate the feedback! and i’ll definitely check out your books either way. take care <3
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AshTheDreamChaser

@ripv4nwinkle Hi. Thanks for considering me for a R4R, but I have very little time, so I can't promise anything.
            I've looked through the first two chapters of your book, and while the premise is really interesting and has huge potential, you could try engaging the reader with the MC from the start, rather than concentrate on the world building and memories. Maybe show him looking desperately for his friend rather than telling us he'd been searching without success.
            Good luck with your writing. If I have more time, I'll come back to your book :)
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