AshTree_04

Not going to continue with my story I was doing based on my life. Don't want to explain so please respect that. Ill be starting a new series called "A Lost Memory"

Red_Pheonix26

Thanks so so so much for liking my story and and commenting and voting on it!! A new chapter is up now :) 

AshTree_04

@Red_Pheonix26 thank you very much. :D
            Ill be sure to use your advise
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Red_Pheonix26

@Red_Pheonix26 hey, I read your story. I'll tell you the advice I got given when writing a story (although I know I'm not really the person to ask for this) I always try to 1. Describe things in quite a lot of detail so you can get an idea of what's around you and the character's emotions. 2. Make the character someone relatable and 3. Drops hints as to what could happen so then you kind of want to read on. But otherwise I liked it! Keep it up :D
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