AshenlyShay

Hey, as some of you noticed, I have this tiny book called "Vren's Monster Journal." It is a side book to my main book I am making. I am not a great writer and quite the edgelord. If you want to read the draft-ish writing I have done, I can send in 4 chapters. If people like it, I will send a few more chapters so you guys can read and help my writing. Thank you for reading my shitty fanfics and my poorly done side book. I know I don't write often, and I need to finish so many fanfics and may hopefully get the drive to finish them someday.

AshenlyShay

Hey, as some of you noticed, I have this tiny book called "Vren's Monster Journal." It is a side book to my main book I am making. I am not a great writer and quite the edgelord. If you want to read the draft-ish writing I have done, I can send in 4 chapters. If people like it, I will send a few more chapters so you guys can read and help my writing. Thank you for reading my shitty fanfics and my poorly done side book. I know I don't write often, and I need to finish so many fanfics and may hopefully get the drive to finish them someday.

steviecorruption

But other than that, are you enjoying the story. what do you like about it?

AshenlyShay

@steviecorruption understood, can't wait to see what else will happen
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AshenlyShay

@steviecorruption I quite enjoy the differences of the children and how they are not just pure copies of their mothers. Most do that, and I appreciate that. I like the smoothness of going from place to place so there is no going to fast in 1 area or staying to close in 1 area. There are good dynamics in both talk and fighting styles between Ying, Shawn, Stella, and Rodrick. There is also the fact that you didn't just give all the flask, bell, and other such things. There are a limited amount, so they don't all have it all, which is a good idea. The children actually talk to the other people of the lands between which we as the Tarnished can't have as much thanks to limited talking options. There can be a lot of interesting options there. The children can go in different directions on the paths of different endings, but that takes a long time, so it's alright if that doesn't happen.
            
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AshenlyShay

Hey guys, I just had all my wisdom teeth to removed (yes, I know late puller hehe) and damn it does feel like you got smacked in the jaw once the pain meds slowly stop working. Note, my chin now feels like a lump of leather, and I spill like a 1 1/2 year old because of my huger lower lip.
          So yeah pray that it heals good and thanks for any support. I have been going through a lot these past couple of weeks to fix myself and contribute to society so that is why I haven't been uploading a lot. (Well that and writer's block).
          Anyway I thank you all in these times being both supportive and criticizing my work fairly so I can be better.
          Bye bye for now.

AshenlyShay

Sorry I didn't make any chapters for the week I have been focused on dnd lately

Senator_Armstrong7th

@unnaturallyunknown cuz generation zero is really good
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Senator_Armstrong7th

@unnaturallyunknown and I’d love more generation rwby
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