AATCS is going to take a lot of work for the next few chapters, I will be trying to focus on character development and making sure my readers won't expect what will happen. I'm going to stop dumping a whole bunch of information in one part of the chapter since that slows down pacing. And will try to not have the characters talking so much during fights. Thanks for suggestion and comments since they are always appreciated. I will see you in the upcoming chapters of Ace and the Crescent Snake. [Chapters might come out a little slow due to this being my first year in high school so bare with me]