AshleyMarie95

I would like to thank everyone who stood up for me. Thank God I did not see any of these comments or messages when I was a child, because these would have broke me to the point of no return. I loved writing so much. But I also wanted to be a book editor when I was done with school, no I didn't pursue that goal because, again, I was a child. So fuck everyone who hated me and thank you to everyone who stood by my side. I forgot the password to this account years ago and made a new one, sooo if you want to go check out my other shitty work on my other page it's killzombies247
          

Hi! I read over your book and I saw a lot of those nasty comments. Well, I’m a mature adult, and so instead of being a jerk, I’m here to give constructive criticism! Because we all need improvements, as you have taken time to prove in your comments on the books you’ve read. 
          Now. This only qualifies for the book called “Help is nedded but now wanted...”
          I read over it, and you’ve got a nice plot going on, and good description and a bright way of expressing your characters. You’ve also got decent pacing, and that’s very good when it comes to chapter lengths. Lovely job with all that!
          The only fixes that should be made are, obviously, number one, the grammar. Proper punctuation and spelling comes in handy when trying to intrigue readers, and sometimes mistakes can ruin a moment when a reader is really deeply involved in the story.
          Another thing, try correcting the title of your book. I’ve noticed it’s “Nedded” and not “needed”? That’ll be helpful when trying to interest readers in your story!
          Also, you should put up your own book over that suits the story in itself; there’s nothing wrong with a little creativity! If you don’t like or don’t know how to make book covers, see to —> https://www.wattpad.com/46678415-how-to-make-book-covers-book-cover
          Or, if you want, go to http://weheartit.com for some unique and athstetic pictures, then head on over to https://www.canva.com/create/book-covers/ to easily craft amazing covers for free! Book covers are essential; they’re what makes someone pick up that book and read the description which leads to them reading your book.
          Another thing; the description! There are a few parts that are hard to understand, and the capitalisation issue gives the impression that you do that throughout the book, which is not true, so you might want to try that. 
          Ah, and finally, the triggers. The plot is good, and the cutting is relatable. But the way it’s read, it seems like you’re encouraging self harm. Change that attitude, and you’re good to go!

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Honey, if you read this, but you probably won't because you might've deleted Wattpad because of all the cyber bullies on this, I just want to say a couple of things, first off, that I think you are beautiful, is that you in the profile picture? I also wanted to say, ignore all these stupid people, they have nothing better to do so they bully other people because they think it's funny, pfft. My generation disgusts me. I know what they say hurts, I know what it feels like. But like a wise person once said; A ship doesn't sink unless water gets inside of it, just like the negativity of the world can't bring you down unless you let it get inside of you. Stay strong, keep your chin up, and your head held high. Keep writing your stories, block the haters, or report them. I'm here if you ever need to talk. 

  reality check, maybe she's just trying to help her out, so she doesn't have to re-read her chapter and change everything she can just look at comments. Stop harassing this girl because she's most likely trying to help someone. I'm sorry people are so cruel to people @AshleyMarie95's

Please you guys please quit harassing her. You really are just bullying her and we already have enough of that in this world. :(
          Would you really say this to her in person? Just think. Also, if she bothers you then JUST IGNORE HER COMMENTS AND MOVE ON •^• Don't be an ignorant and immature a-hole.

Guys stop posting stuff on her wall and try to stop replying to her comments. The more attention you give her, the more she'll try to do it to piss you guys off so the best thing to do would be to ignore her completely. 

I would love if someone would correct my werewolf book

I just wanted to tell you that I am so sorry for all the people who are bothering you. People completely blew things out of proportion. Don't listen to them. And to all the people out there harassing her; stop it. All she did was do grammar and spelling corrections with a few suggestions. She was not disrespectful to anyone. Yet, everyone is being very disrespectful to her. To the point where they are making fun of her stories and mocking the characters. I've been reading her story about that girl being abused and I've noticed a few people making fun of it. Let me tell you something, abuse is not funny. But I guess you guys don't care since you are abusers yourselves, right? Leave her alone! If you really hate her harmless grammar corrections that much, don't read them! I don't mean to rant, but I just had to say something.

Not trying to be mean but, you don't have to point out every fudging flaw. You're ruining the story for everyone else. I have a diagnosis for your behaviour - Jealousy. It's when one becomes jealous of someone and gets angry and feels hey should point out every flaw they can see in their eyes. Nobody is flawless. I'm only 11 but atleast I'm sensible. Now please shut your Venus fly trap, you've caught too much flies.