Asianstargirl

in all honesty I really should rewrite my book cause I started it in like 7th or 8th grade and I just graduated hs and looking at what i wrote gives me second hand embarrassment. like I know readings are saying it too especially the first feast where she performs.... yeah.... I really should rewrite it better. but Idk so I'll just leave the og up and maybe rewrite a new one separately

AbbyPrincess000

@KJ_Potterhead07 I personally really love it and still do to this day as wrote I was able to see all the images as you described them in my head. Picturing the booming sound of multiple orchestra instruments playing all at once, their symphony echoing throughout the great hall and being heard beyond the walls of hogwarts and throughout the castle. I could imagine the mist-like images almost resembling patronuses showing pirate captains, ships and crews fighting battles in the days of old. In my opinion this story was BRILLIANT especially the fact that you came up with it when you were so young and were able to build a plot  on it so well. However you are the author so you choose what to do with your book. However, when you do start over could you not completely get rid of everything from this one like maybe edit and incorporate some things over into your new book? But thank you for taking the time to write this I amazing piece I wont speak for anyone else but I LOVED it and for reading my long comment. Keep up the  good work Author!!!!!!!!!!
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moomglowxX

Yellow my fellow! Thank you for reading and commenting on my story, it motivates me to do better and continue the story. Please enjoy the journey and keep reading and commenting, it means a lot to me. Thank you, love!!!❤️✨

Asianstargirl

in all honesty I really should rewrite my book cause I started it in like 7th or 8th grade and I just graduated hs and looking at what i wrote gives me second hand embarrassment. like I know readings are saying it too especially the first feast where she performs.... yeah.... I really should rewrite it better. but Idk so I'll just leave the og up and maybe rewrite a new one separately

AbbyPrincess000

@KJ_Potterhead07 I personally really love it and still do to this day as wrote I was able to see all the images as you described them in my head. Picturing the booming sound of multiple orchestra instruments playing all at once, their symphony echoing throughout the great hall and being heard beyond the walls of hogwarts and throughout the castle. I could imagine the mist-like images almost resembling patronuses showing pirate captains, ships and crews fighting battles in the days of old. In my opinion this story was BRILLIANT especially the fact that you came up with it when you were so young and were able to build a plot  on it so well. However you are the author so you choose what to do with your book. However, when you do start over could you not completely get rid of everything from this one like maybe edit and incorporate some things over into your new book? But thank you for taking the time to write this I amazing piece I wont speak for anyone else but I LOVED it and for reading my long comment. Keep up the  good work Author!!!!!!!!!!
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Asianstargirl

One more thing I forgot to mention! I'm going to be editing some things in my story because I've realised --and been told-- that Aurora is too OP so I'm going to fix that before I publish the other chapters. That means I'm going to have to edit the previous chapters, so please be patient with me. Like I said, thank you so much for sticking around and supporting this fanfic. I love you guys

leilavalentiina

Are you gonna continue the story?
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Runa_Norell

@KJ_Potterhead07 RIP OP Aurora d:
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Asianstargirl

Back to witches to wizards and magical beasts To goblins and ghosts and to magical feasts
          It's all that I love, and it's all I need 
          At Hogwarts, Hogwarts
          I think we're going back.
          
          Its September 1st and it's another year at Hogwarts! I'm sorry that I havent updated in so long, but I'm still balancing out between school, marching band, and working on the chapters. But I'm still so sorry. Hopefully I get them done soon. But I hope you guys are having a wonderful day and thank you for staying with me and I love you guys for supporting my story