Askook

Be loud, Be proud, and be who you want to be, not who others want to see.

Askook

@Blinding_beauty
          You ask people. You can ask friends and family, or post thing on yahoo or a blog if you have one, ask people for their opinions and take both the good and the bad. Then you can make improvements and soon people will just start reading. I can't guarentee that you will be the next J.K. Rowling, but people may start reading your book. 
          I hope that people do read your book, I'm going to and I hope you like my works to, HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Askook

@aRiyam thank you so much for your advice, I think that my story has a good plot but I have currently decided to take it down. I posted my first draft on to this website and have decided to do a couple of more drafts before I repost the story. I will let you know when I have reposted my story because I am very very interested in what you have to say.

aRiyam

Hey, I know your into fantasy and stuff. Theres a book I read called 'Chained' I think you might like it very much. You can read it and find out how to make stories more interesting for readers. You can search the reader's name (cold_lady19) and then see her books.