Aspen Ritsma

I made a slight change in the editing in both of the chapters, I hope this improves the quality a little. Let me know what you think
          
          Love,
          Aspen.

I will probably not be releasing the second chapter tomorrow since I didn't have enough time to write due to school and family matters. I will try to make more time free to write and not just sit on my lazy ass.
          Love Aspen