
Nellybakusimp
Hi, so you've said before that your open to criticism and iv just reread 'it doesn't matter if were crazy' I loved it and will keep going back to it, but back to what I was saying ,close to the end when katsuki was chopping up the girl he shoved her head in a plastic bag and then in the next chapter izuku mentioned her head still attached to her body so he ripped it off and put it in a plastic bag, which gave of the impression that you dont reread what you write before you write the next chapter, I'd recommend rereading before doing the next chapter if you dont already, tho I dont know how much you've improved I haven't read alot of your newer books having said that, all the books of yours I have read I really loved, your one of my favourite authors. I really hope I didnt sound rude (T^T)

Assassin_sin
@Nellybakusimp You didn't sound rude at all!! ヽ(´д`)ノ Im really happy that you noticed something like that, I don't actually go back once I post something! Thank you for pointing it out, im excited to fix that flaw when writing in the future! Thank you so much!! ヽ(*´▽)ノ♪
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