heya, i just saw this post, and i wanted to leave some feedback, so here ya go <3
( btw sorry if this stuff is super little, i’m just very nitpicky lmao- )
firstly, tenses; in some of your books, i’ve noticed the tense ( past, present ) seems to change up sometimes — obviously, this one is very small, i just notice it sometimes.
secondly, clarification and confusion. in poultry pressure, the monster / demon thing is kind of hard to follow. i’m not sure if it’s based on a show or not, and i know there isn’t a lot of chapter posted at this time, but i’m still a little lost.
i might add ore to this sometime, but overall, your writing’s pretty great. keep up the good work <3