DragonBH

I hope you enjoyed my story.

Astaroth_1117

Using saiko intelli is good choice cause it's fresh than other girls and not much used too.and i like how the Shadows getting shocked due to izuku actions sometimes, also bellion wanting izuku to grow is also nice. Also gotta finish reading your story as I've been busy with a lot of things. 
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DragonBH

Well, thank you. Wish I got more people actually commenting on the story but still nice to hear your thoughts. what you think of the characters?
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Astaroth_1117

@DragonBH i like the change in story from the original, the way he got his powers also kinda like how he's practically same as canon izuku. The system share is a new approach for me, so waiting to see how much it's gonna help them get stronger. New concept of constructs is good too,
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