Astralbane

Lol. massive blow to my self esteem. Don't know as anyone will ever read this but I'm posting it anyway. Anyone on here a half decent literary critic? I need some help rewording a few scenes

Astralbane

ok. i have *no* idea how many people are going to get this or how many are going to care if they do but i'm uploading my newly finished novel for review. it's still in editing stages so I'm looking for (constructive) criticism. i've showed two of my friends and so far all i've gotten is "it's great" and "it needs more lesbians"
          just a warning it does have a lot of (seemingly casual) references to things like rape. if that bothers you then don't read it but there isn't anything graphic in there so please, looking for genuine reviews before i try to publish it, sorry for the double post btw. forgot to broadcast