Asuamah7858

Please read and tell me what you think.
          	I am a beginner so if something is done wrong pleas notify me
          	I just published "Chapter1 The Farwell Celebration" of my story "The Pearl". https://www.wattpad.com/1195200125?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Asuamah7858&wp_originator=66pOe%2FmGz9uev5QFbtoBu3T1gApzJDjMpqUOwbFIxob2oTCQ%2FFnVqXwB9Wf%2BBs0hcr4zJSpz%2FRQ5FzZRi1v%2F%2Fo06eOaLAFT72IwvarUJh877Tky6UA7blPJXSsUdZ8xE