masahnzahara
Please, I would like your opinion on my story
https://www.wattpad.com/story/410269069-%F0%9D%94%B8%F0%9D%95%A7%F0%9D%95%96%F0%9D%95%9F%F0%9D%95%98%F0%9D%95%96%F0%9D%95%A3-%F0%9D%94%BB%F0%9D%95%96%F0%9D%95%9C%F0%9D%95%A6
masahnzahara
Thank you, and I hope you will continue reading, as my English writing is not good.
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AsukaMiyamura
@masahnzahara Looks great so far! I would suggest for chapter one to flow into it a bit more, but otherwise it looks stellar. Keep up the good work
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