Kicker5649
Hey are you still alive
Kicker5649
But hey it’s your story do what you want to do. Also I’m glad to see that you’re still here.
Kicker5649
Got it my suggestion if you want to make it feel less rushed make a chapter about how would Lihan would find the emperor and why it’s important he defeat him and what’s at stake. Kinda like a chapter where lihan goes hunting for clues as well as since this is after spitfires have him deal with him breathing fire and turning into a human/dragon hybrid and how its effecting his psyche as well as Ashe and rei coming back and finding him and trying to deal with what they told him about what happened.
