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└➤ like I said, I read into your story^^ I'm not finished, but I'll definitely read it to the end, it piqued my interest
as for your writing and how to improve it:
overall, your style is pleasant to read and you have a cool vocabulary (if you're not american/english, wow, if yes, than still good!)
I enjoyed reading it!
the only place I could find improvement in, would maybe be proofreading, but of course you cant find every typo, that's human and okay
as long as you enjoy it, I think you have many chances with your writing, you're good ♡ 。
⎈ HeHeT yeosnac
