Hello! Thanks for supporting on my story "Rewind Villainess". If ever you have any suggestions, feel free to message me!
With hugs and kisses,
From Monopanpan
Thanks for adding my storyyyyyyyyy~!
and I just looked at your story but it does look a little cliche(With the mary Jane, but I can't say I've never been there...)But it looks like it's going in a really good direction! The end of the chapter was good, though it's not understood why she wasn't 'home' in the first place.
Remember that mystery is good but too much can lead to confusion which will stud the reader's interest.
Haskel(Miku)Is so cute! I want to know what happens!