Lorena_Slowaki

Thank you for reading, supporting and adding "A Passionate Love" to your reading list, glad you liked it :D

Lorena_Slowaki

Thank you for reading, supporting and adding "The Cursed Bride" to your reading list ❤️
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Mikki-Senpai

Thanks for adding my storyyyyyyyyy~!
          and I just looked at your story but it does look a little cliche(With the mary Jane, but I can't say I've never been there...)But it looks like it's going in a really good direction! The end of the chapter was good, though it's not understood why she wasn't 'home' in the first place. 
          Remember that mystery is good but too much can lead to confusion which will stud the reader's interest. 
          Haskel(Miku)Is so cute! I want to know what happens!

Mikki-Senpai

@Mikki-Senpai I got that! It's interesting!
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AthenaCelestialBlue

@Mikki-Senpai, actually this story that I'm making is mixing with some cliche and some mystery. I added some of my favorite genres. 
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