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@SarahQuinn296 you got it right love. ❤

@AricaelMalone  your very welcome I found ur story in the fantasy section im really into fairy tails, legends, myths, etc. I was currently looking at the history of the pied piper and so ur story made me more interested.

@mysteriousteenrebel that would be very helpful its always good to have a reader read ur work to help make ur story better

@mysteriousteenrebel oh and try and get a book cover, it catches the readers eye.

@mysteriousteenrebel and u r welcome, I just hope u can twke ur time to read one of my stories and dont wrry u can tell me everything wrong with it.

@mysteriousteenrebel yea it kinda helps explain how they are feeling what they see, hear, remember, etc. the settings, anything that will explain the situation. understand?

@mysteriousteenrebel right after her teacher told her to go out of the classroom. it took me a while to realize what you were saying but then I got it, maybe you should add more detail.

@mysteriousteenrebel ur story is good but make sure u go over it and make sure it makes sense at some parts I got kinda lost. and dont wrry once u write more more and more people will read it try and follow people and have them follow you. keep writing, never grow up.
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              I would like if you read one if my books read mine and ill keep reading urs.