AttackonSonic201

Chapter 2 has now been updated, along with a repost of the old chapter! Working on Chapter 3. The story is taking just a bit of a rewrite.

AttackonSonic201

OK I REWROTE CHAPTER 1! Chapter 2 will be following up with a rewrite as well. Rewriting the chapters will make it easier for me to guide future chapters along. Sorry it's taken me so long to do any work, I've been quite busy in my life with college and all. I do plan to post another chapter while rewriting, but I didn't want to leave the old chapters to- still be as choppy as they are. I've improved a lot and want to show that for those who will be newer to the story. I hope you'll continue reading for whenever I get this done, and you all stay safe!

AttackonSonic201

I have a question for you guys. Should I rewrite my old chapters of "I Miss You, Dad", or keep them as they are to show my progress in writing?

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@AttackonSonic201 Please continue it
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AttackonSonic201

@AttackonSonic201 Oh, no no, I'm continuing it, of course. But when a new chapter comes out, I wanted to know if I should invest some time into editing the old chapters to perhaps make more sense, more grammatically correct and what not. I've been working on it for so many years that I've been through at least three-four different stages of writing throughout that period of time. My beginning chapters are rusty that are in need of a shine, so I've been considering re-writing. My other option was to keep it, as mentioned above, to show the progress I've made, as a writer, over all of these years.
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SavageBean05

@AttackonSonic201 please continue it
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RoseriaValeria

Hi there, thank you so much for reading and commenting on my story. I really appreciate it and I hope you enjoyed it. If you did, please do check out other stories of mine or support me by following me to keep updated on my stories! Thank you so much, it truly means the world to me.

AttackonSonic201

@RoseriaValeria Oh my goodness I never realized you commented this ;3;!
            
            But you are truly welcome, and I hope you've had a wonderful year so far!
            
            And, of course, I always comment and read good stories
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AttackonSonic201

Alright, everyone. I have an announcement to make. To all my friends/followers, I have made a Naruto RP. I know it's kinda weird that I'm making one, but I thought it'd be nice. But anyways, I need, what you would call, "admins" even though you can't actually like, y'know, do things admins do in actual games, but someone that can help me set up rules and dates for events I call "Main RP". It's not really easy to explain here, but I'd like to just get the word out.
          
          For the "admins", I would need someone that:
          
          (1) Knows a Lot About Naruto and the Characters' Techniques
          
          (2) Good at Remembering Stuff, Unlike Me xD
          
          And more that I'll havr to explain later because of school, oof.

AttackonSonic201

But, yes, I know it seems a little weird, but I'd simply like to keep the RPs organized. If you'd like to help out, simply comment here or message me :p
            
            Thanks <3
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