Au_riata

I am starting a book.. it's a collection of poems named The versions of me.
          	
          	“The Versions of Me” is a personal poetry collection that traces my journey — from the innocence of childhood to the storms of teenagehood, from dreamy beginnings to uncertain futures.
          	
          	Each poem is a snapshot of who I was, who I am, and who I’m becoming.
          	
          	If you’ve ever felt too much, loved too hard, or missed what never fully was — welcome to my world.
          	 
          	I would love to hear your feedback after reading. If you like it please share it and vote it too.
          	Thank u so much

Thefireecracker

Why do you always appear when I’m falling apart?” She whispered, eyes brimming with unshed tears.
          
          He stepped closer, his voice barely above a murmur.
          “Because I don’t like seeing what’s being broken.”
          
          She looked away, trembling.
          “I’m not yours.”
          
          He leaned in, his words like a quiet storm.
          “Then stop running to me every time he hurts you.”
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/307086203?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Thefireecracker

NinaWhimsy

Hello Author! Good greetings to you! Sorry for plugging out of nowhere, but I just want to promote my on going story! Every Saturday updates! Thank you Author, have a good day!
          
          TAG-LISH? YES!
          MASHAKET? YES!
          MAY CHEATING? WALA!
          HAPPY ENDING? HMMM… SIGURO?
          SLOW BURN? OMG YES NA YES!
          
          This isn’t your typical love story.
          This is a story of broken pieces, healing scars,
          and two souls trying to survive a world that never played fair.
          
          ENGLISH VERSION IS OUT NOW!!!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/393338810?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&u-m_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=NinaWhimsy

Thefireecracker

You think I’m the villain?” he whispered. “I became this monster... the day you left.”
          In the quietest moments, the heart speaks the loudest. Twilight in the Arms is a journey through love, loss, and the fragile beauty of fleeting moments. Are you ready to lose yourself in its pages?" Please give it a try 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/307086203?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Thefireecracker

Au_riata

I am starting a book.. it's a collection of poems named The versions of me.
          
          “The Versions of Me” is a personal poetry collection that traces my journey — from the innocence of childhood to the storms of teenagehood, from dreamy beginnings to uncertain futures.
          
          Each poem is a snapshot of who I was, who I am, and who I’m becoming.
          
          If you’ve ever felt too much, loved too hard, or missed what never fully was — welcome to my world.
           
          I would love to hear your feedback after reading. If you like it please share it and vote it too.
          Thank u so much

untoldtalesofmine

acosmist_sloth

Hi there! I was asked by your cousin for a review and promotions. My insta Id is wattpader_07. 
          
          Here is the review:-
           The story is written in a well mannered and presentable way. The scenes are descriptive and it helps us to imagine the whole situation. The storyline for now, is going good. I would suggest you to read some more well known books, like -'The American Roomate Experience', it will help you in writing dialogues effectively. Overall, I like your work. Keep it up:)
          
          (Promotional reel will be posted in a couple of weeks on Instagram)

Au_riata

@acosmist_sloth Thank u soo much for the review I will for sure read the book u recomended to improve the writing. 
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vedi03

Please accept my apology to share my story prior without your permission , please do check it out and give your feedback on it ✨
          
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          ex lovers meet at their cousins engagement party and their parents decide to get them married, they think the other person cheated what will happen next in their tangled life ?
          
          You cannot MAKE someone love you. It is better to let them go than try to hang-on. No matter how much you think you are perfect for him/her-if s/he isn't interested they aren't perfect for you.. accept it and move on ,but can life  be this easy ?https://www.wattpad.com/story/351504845-tangled-hate