Hey, guys! It's me, the annoying girl who only has one story! Anyways, if any of you are still interested in OFD, I just wanted to say that I changed a lot of things to it. Especially Chapter 4 with the "nightmare sequence". I previously had many problems with that chapter and felt as if I had used a redundant cliche with it. This problem has thankfully been removed now, and replaced with what I deem a fitting start to Aubrey and Bill's relationship. If you have the time and will, you can go ahead and check it out! Thank you!
