@Afdhel Feedback? Certainly! It switch tenses a bit in the second paragraph and gives no concrete detail. Also, it's a risky move starting with a paragraph of purposefully bromide-filled writing. The “He had known her for 10 years now” paragraph has a lot of qualifiers that diminish the power of the writing. Would love if you could show-not-tell us that he's in love with her instead. The description of the door is strong. Dialogue seems believable, but there's not a strong sense of plot. I think the story would be stronger if you established that they were going to go to the grave yard sooner and gave both characters a stronger sense of motivation within the scene. That's my critical eye talking though. Definitely is strong writing. Thanks for giving a look at my story :)
