AudreyScotts

Hey guys, chapter One of my new book is out, 'Miss Virgin'. 
          	
          	It's a story about the troubles of a teenage girl who is labelled as Miss Virgin by her school after a series of bad luck. Read how Charley goes through the torture of high school and whether she finds a happy ending.
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/135802247

Califia

Hey AudreyScotts~~Came across your "Miss Virgin" story quite randomly. I like what your doing with it and particularly the premise of the story. I have some suggestions as to how you can make it a real page-turner. Take a look at how I handle the same motif in "That Sultry Summer". I would be interested in what you think of it and especially "The Gift"--last chapter (when and if you get there, of course).
          
          I have been interested in writing stories for young adult and teens for some time with a central character  always a female who faces tough dilemmas. I am also pretty frank about sexual issues and how girls think of themselves, their bodies and how their independence is often stifled by male docrins, beliefs and pressures put upon them--sometimes dreadfully in certain cultures. We can discuss this further, if you wish, and as to how it can help shape your own writing toward more readership and attention.
          
          Let me know.
          ~~Califia
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/73057438-that-sultry-summer