Hi,
I just finished reading your story and I loved it so much! Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic. The vivid descriptions of the Cancun resort, from the high ceilings and woven straw chandeliers to the breathtaking views of the turquoise ocean, would look incredible in a comic panel. I can already picture the characters in that gorgeous lobby, with the tension between Andre and the receptionist adding such an interesting dynamic.
The little moments like Dominic trying to keep things light with the drinks and the group dealing with the mix-up in their room reservations are perfect for comic timing. It would be so fun to explore those interactions visually!
I’m a commissioned artist and I’d love to draw your story into a comic. No pressure though, I just think your work would look awesome in comic form.
If you’re interested, you can message me on X (SarahSummers), Instagram (sarahthedelusional), or add me on Discord (sarah_summers). Let me know what you think!
Best,
Sarah