AuliaSaputri676

Hi! Thanks for your feedback earlier... Can I ask which part felt unfocused to you? I'd really like to know so I can improve my writing. I appreciate your honest opinion!
          

Haiii Aul...
          Aku tau kamu suka menjelajahi cerita GinJay hee
          kira² kamu pernah baca gak cerita GinJay yg jd kembar cwek cwok, yg cwok namanya Stevens tp di cerita itu dia meninggal. Aku mo baca lagi tp lupa nama akun authornya. Mungkin kamu tau? Hahaa

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