Aura Light Star

@ThesePatheticHumans  Well, Hiiii How are you doing?

*In case you didn't recognise me.

@AuraLightStar preach

@Irishistoire009 Hi Irish sorry, it took me long to answer you.  My writing, good or bad, If I published books or not won't change things directly for you.  They won't make you a better writer or make me a bad reader. 
            You are sharing your writing to all to read. Expect positive and negative comments.  
            We get happy with good comments. But what makes much stronger, better and one day best writers are the negative comments. 
            Some comments make sense others we throw away. We learn from them. 
            They are just as a failed exam. We study and work harder next time and the next. Until we, not only pass the test, but we score high.  
            My comment made you feel bad. Good, use that and be much better not just for the next book but with every sentence you write. I'll be the first one to cheer you up with every good step you make. 
            Don't be just a writer, we have too many of them on Watpad and even publishing books. 
            Be the BEST

Lol. 

@AuraLightStar
            It's titled UnRiddled. There are only two chapters on Wattpad, because I wanted to finish it before publishing here. It's on quotev and archiveofourown. You can access it there even without an account.
            There were people commenting, which I found incredible. Actual comments telling me they like the plot and character development, not the LOL and Lmao stuff.
            
            Anyway, how is life treating you? I've started graduation exams.

@DragonaireAbsolvare I forgot to ask. Which story was it? and is it on wattpad?

@DragonaireAbsolvare That is great news :) and not little even if it is fanfiction.  Soon will be your own. Congratulations.  Keep in touch

@AuraLightStar How is it? I tried, but this story was so confusing at the beginning.

@DragonaireAbsolvare  Congratulation for the 50/50math :)  Tears of joy!! Jump jump jump :D 
            I admire your determination, managing your time with updating and finishing Moonbeam and you also have other stories. I am sure your writing will improve with every sentence. I am happy for you and wish you moreeeeee

I'm pressured...
            School goes so-so, and Moonbeam has two chapters to go! We had exams, and unbelievably, I got 50/50 (full marks, first time in my life) in math! I double-checked the papers to see if it was my own paper, and if the teacher had made some calculation mistake in counting marks... It took a while for my head to process it. And then, I cried tears of joy.

@DragonaireAbsolvare  Hi, Ia m doing well but busy with life and life.. How are you?

Hi to you.  Sorry just being busy with life
            I did reread HHYL for months now.  The first time was fast and I just wanted something easy 
            I am trying not to start a story unless it is completed. However, I still do fast scan sometimes
            I don't know The Rebirth of Chen An but you are recommending it so I am in :) ,  Where can I find it
            I am reading other stories but not on wattpad right now that have different approaches, not BL 
            Don't know the The Ugly Prince... I will let you know if I find it. 
            By the way do you go to http://bltranslation.blogspot.ca/   ?  There is Brothers have few more chapters to be completed.  It is not history.  and I think it will be sad.  I just review it, it is good and I will read it when it is complete
            Most importantly, I was trying to read more of The Shadow of a Moonbeam  before I talk to you but I think it is good now.  As I said I am reading it very slow as the start of it is not my take of books, recently.  I am readying easy fast stories.  Yours is different but I will finish it. I am only on chapter 2
            You are good.  I think the story will be good. Please don't feel whatever I will say is negative.  The start is complected.  I think if you started with shorter chapters, more description for each character/ type/ cities and such would be easier. Or maybe just add a description chapter/Glossary.  Now just if went easy and stretch a little in the prologue or make the clarification to be within the story itself instead all in the start of it.  But as soon as moving to more chapters things started flowing easily  and I am starting to enjoy it more.  You don't make grammars or spilling mistakes and you are careful to produce good product.  and you are not stopping and leaving your readers hanging without update or progress.  And you don't need to write only about BL.  Write good books and you will have readers in every type or field you choose 
            So You are doing very good for first stories. Keep going, OK OK? 
             I am cheering for you