Aurelia-of-Capua

Sorry I haven't replied to anyone, but my personal life has been very busy lately, and I have a lot of other obligations in various social media groups I'm in on other platforms.

Cappy_webdesign

Yo mate how are you doing
          Hope you are doing great 
          
          
          I just finished reading a few chapters of your book on here, and I have to say you’ve built such a rich world that really pull readers in. Your writing deserves to be seen far beyond just one platform.
          I’m a web designer who works with authors like you to create simple, elegant author websites. A personal site gives you a central place to showcase your stories, updates, and even future books something that's fully yours, beyond Wattpad.
          
          If you'd ever considered having your own site, I’d love to design something that matches your vibe and helps boost your professional presence. Just a clean, reader-friendly site to show the world what you're building.
          
          You can check out my work or chat with me here: [TELEGRAM (@Cappy_samuel) DISCORD (Cappy_samuel) or GMAIL (Cappysamuel@gmail.com) ]. I’d be happy to share ideas or even do a free sample layout if you're curious.
          
          Keep writing. Your story has something special!
          
          Cappy  
          Web Designer for Authors ✍️

Aurelia-of-Capua

Part of me wants to rewrite the first book, add a few new characters, and iron out a lot of issues that I'm now noticing in the lore.

Aurelia-of-Capua

@waaar81 thanks
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waaar81

My advice for this would be; don’t add any more characters, you’re writing a Novelette (Under 20k words), you don’t need a bunch of POV characters. Focus on fleshing out the ones that are the most important to the current plot, otherwise you’ll just end up with a pool of underdeveloped and shallow characters. For Book 1, if you’re leaning on having the story centered more on Connin, I would focus on making him the predominant POV (he has the most chapters and/or is doing the most in the story), because ironically in “The Bastard” Marilla would be the predominant POV.
            Focus on fleshing out Connin’s motivations, his wants, his needs and his goals.
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blossomomosses

Hi Aurelia! I'm new here as a wattpad writer and I want to support your new book. As an avid lgbt+ reader,I am willing to support new authors with interesting books <3 Feel free to check my new book too! Votes and comments would be much appreciated.
          
          I really like the way you write too.

Aurelia-of-Capua

@blossomomosses Thank you, and I will certainly give your book a read.
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