Aurelia-of-Capua

I'm glad my block has gone, and I am I able to write once more.

Aurelia-of-Capua

Part of me wants to rewrite the first book, add a few new characters, and iron out a lot of issues that I'm now noticing in the lore.

waaar81

My advice for this would be; don’t add any more characters, you’re writing a Novelette (Under 20k words), you don’t need a bunch of POV characters. Focus on fleshing out the ones that are the most important to the current plot, otherwise you’ll just end up with a pool of underdeveloped and shallow characters. For Book 1, if you’re leaning on having the story centered more on Connin, I would focus on making him the predominant POV (he has the most chapters and/or is doing the most in the story), because ironically in “The Bastard” Marilla would be the predominant POV.
            Focus on fleshing out Connin’s motivations, his wants, his needs and his goals.
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blossomomosses

Hi Aurelia! I'm new here as a wattpad writer and I want to support your new book. As an avid lgbt+ reader,I am willing to support new authors with interesting books <3 Feel free to check my new book too! Votes and comments would be much appreciated.
          
          I really like the way you write too.

Aurelia-of-Capua

@blossomomosses Thank you, and I will certainly give your book a read.
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