Hi just read Saras child. It was the only book of the links you sent that I was able to download. .. Maybe my tech skills? You mentioned some this?
For me the over all concept very believable, and amazing the way you showed the power of having someone believe in you.. The strength that it gives to your life.
A couple of thoughts. When they initially came together, I felt a little soon? The defenses that Catherine had built were so complete... That although they finally together, I would have expected some more self doubt from Catherine.. trying to talk
herself out of it. So couple more encounters, meetings would have done this for me.
Also there were times early on as we were learning of some of Catherines hurt that I started to suspect Ben may have somehow been involved. ?! I was steeling myself for a massive betrayal! Even when it came to her revealing herself and her past to him, I still didn't trust him. Not sure how you get round that? Maybe see a bit more of his support for her? His thoughts towards her, and how string their friendship is, and what it has meant to him would have been great.
Comment below re sex? Foundamentalists@?... always ask them if they have read song of Solomon in the Bible. ? Pretty explicit as well.
After this story. .. Saras child.. .. What is the next one in your series?
Regards
Deirdre