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I particularly appreciate Arya's straightforwardness, courage and unsightly presence. She is an interesting and charismatic woman who completely diverges from the usual "villainess" cliche, as her complexity lies behind a long story and events kept in some crystal pieces, ,coming one after another ,to light. I am also really fond of Miya as she is an efficient yet respectful and smart subordinate. The others characters are also really caring and enlightening such as Sofia the librarian. I loved reading her point of view and understanding the way she perceives Arya (or herself) I appreciate reading about their interactions
. Moreover the story you wonderfully created goes beyond the vast clichés, often used in reincarnations novels. Sometimes, the authors tend to keep the story really predictably, and focus on the romance between the main two characters which
spoil the atmosphere a bit, if I can respectfully say.
(Even though i understand their reason, as they want to bring more light to their novel, and attract readers)
But in yours, the feeling of predictibility completely disappears, and just reading an episode doesn't mean the future events will unfold themselves in a typical or certain way. (With the appearance of the main villains,the obstacles on the way of the main characters, the memories acquired )
Furthermore you show the story the way you imagined the good and bad sides.
I enjoy how the line between the heroes and villains is thick and the importance of not taking a role for granted (like the tragedy of the witches for example). Additionally I am greatly impressed that you show further complexity in your characters's writings and don't make one truly good or bad despite their qualities and defaults.
It really shows the fact that we are all human and none of us are perfect.