Jasmine Dawn

!!Chapter Update!!
          
          Chapter 27 of "the Substitute of kakashi hatake"
          
          Title: A Flicker 
          
          I would appreciate your thoughts 

!!Chapter update!!
          
          Chapter 21 of "the substitute of Kakashi Hatake"
          
          Title ' arigatou... senpai '
          
          Chapter 22 of "the substitute of Kakashi Hatake"
          
          Title: ' infiltration '
          
          Chapter 23 of "the substitute of Kakashi Hatake"
          
          Title: ' ramen dinner '
          
          
          I would appreciate your thoughts.

Title: "Amidst The Storm"
          
          Let's imagine kabuto yakushi, one his way back from a mission finds a teashop and decide to...linger a while then meet a fairly ordinary waitress.
          
          And that waitress, unexpectedly, becomes his one place where he could sit in silence in the midst of his stormy life.
          
          However, deep down that feeling of 'I don't deserve this' whispers everytime he looks at her.
          
          And so, he destroys... whatever that had blossomed between them because...'He's too tainted for something so pure'.
          
          Hurts her with cruel words and leaves her crying.
          
          'it's for the best' he thinks.
          
          And then when he returns to the darkness if otogakure, he finds himself constantly remembering her... every moment, every cup of tea served, every skewer of dango.
          
          He becomes haunted by the memories of the woman he'd tried to leave.
          
          (This story is mostly Kabuto's flashbacks as 'TRIES' to go about his day and her memory flooda his mind with each breath he takes.)
          
          
          
          

Hi, I came across your new story and gave the opening a read. I usually read as a beta reader and like sharing gentle feedback if authors ever want extra eyes on their work.  no pressure at all. Really nice start so far.

hi! Your story "The Substitute of Kakashi Hatake" is very cute and has a lot of potential. I hope you can update soon; i'm looking forward to the next part <3