Ava-lynne

@Random_Clown  welcome c:

JodiMacDougall

I'm really enjoying the story but I think you should go back and read it. The story would flow better with some more description of the environment, the people etc. I feel like the story is being rushed but, even so, I am finding it interesting and can't wait to find out what a Marrow is! 

txsladye

Hello Ava Lynne, I am reading Legends and really like it. But you really need to read what you are writing. You are making alot of mistakes. Also try to capitalize words that need it and use your period, question marks, etc. That would help the one reading alot. You are doing a great job and you keep me on the edge of my set. I'm having a hard time putting your book down. Thanks. Christy