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Can somebody comment on my story anything?

Hello again everybody I was wondering if there is anything I need too add to my story, there aren’t many readers. And I was also wondering if I need too add any more details? If you see this please respond sorry for my grammar and have a wonderful day/night

can somebody read my story and tell me what i need too add, this is my first story so i don’t know what too do, if you tell me anything i have too ad ill love you forever, also im not finshed