AvatoriaRose

And don’t over think it ok just relax and no pressure ok it’s your own story so I’m just trying to help no pressure ok

Ok I’ll get back to you on the description of the characters, and also I have some ideas about the spaceship, like what color it is and what material it’s made out of and what it looks like in the inside the spaceship. Like for an example your favor color like the spaceship is blue and green. The materals are made of metals and copper and the inside the lobby looks amazingly huge and it even has a tv. Maybe adds other stuff too like the seats in the lobby are black.

Your story is good it just needs more descriptive about what your characters look like and also the space ships details as well. For an example my mother the queen has light blue skin and brown eyes and a curvy body. It would also be nice to describe what your characters are waring, like maybe a lab coat and more description please. 

Here is a story line pitch 4 u so originally I was a dragon but got abandoned and raised by wolves and I became a wolf but I descover I can turn into a dragon again if I find my true love who in turn is a dragon that was originally a wolf

Please read the adventures of the last kaylar I posted some chapters. So I hope u like it. 
          

Your Story is great
          

How are you 
          

Hi