Atlantaes

Hey lovely!
          Great work with what you've got so far with your book! I think the plot idea is adorable and I can't say no when Alan Walker is involved loll. One tip is to try and describe the settings and characters more in your books. It will really help immerse the readers. You've got awesome dialogue going for you though! ^~^

Avem_Genius

@Atlantaes Thanks a lot fr the feedback :)
            I will make sure to go ahead with the suggestions.
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