AverageWattpadder1

@coyx2reader Agree!!

@ AveragePadderWatt1  keep the work man good luck 

@BOBBY_THE_DOBBERY yeah bro don’t worry I’m good. Just ADHD getting in the way of writing like the annoying thing it is!

@ AveragePadderWatt1  hey mate I don't want to sound inpatient but are you like okay? Is everything good man?

@ AveragePadderWatt1  take your time mate

@ AveragePadderWatt1  to be fair with you most of the people that are under 13 years old probably have unsupervised internet and that is coming for someone who is 13 years old and have watch happy tree friends, know all the lore of five nights at Freddy's and watch gacha he@t 
            And JOKE ON YOU I'M HERE FOR THE SMU-

@BOBBY_THE_DOBBERY Hey thanks a lot for your feedback! Btw don’t worry I absolutely don’t mind the long responses I love seeing what people think so the longer the better! Definitely agree on the pacing, this part of the story is still theoretically the introduction which is why I sped things up a bit, but dw pacing will definitely be slowed down a bit, especially once we get to a specific part of the story there will be a lot of character moments to just slow things down a bit! I also didn’t really know how to write too well when I began the story, so the first couple chapters were pretty short and contributed to the fast pacing, but I’m definitely getting more of a hang on it now so I’ll definitely be working on that! 
            I took a huge risk with six since every fanfic I read was her either being a mute cannibal who didn’t understand emotions or a weak shy girl who depended fully on mono. None of those really clicked with me tho so i attempted to make my own depiction, and im glad to see you enjoy it! 
            And one last thing, some of the dialogue definitely is a bit corny, but thats mainly just mono and seven. Theyre corny! Despite thr characters being teenagers, they still have childish tendencies, and being corny is part of that. Just know though the corniness is intentional since thats just our good ol boys in love (maybe)! Again i appreciate the feedback since it not only helps me get better but also gives me motivation to write more, so thanks! Im glad youre enjoying the fanfic and i hope youre ready for another chapter soon!

@ BOBBY_THE_DOBBERY  and one last thing author I think you did absolutely great with the fanfic, the character depiction is on point,the pacing can be improved but can easily be tolerated,the idea in itself was unique and interested it make you wanna think "what else is gonna happen?" TLDR I think you absolutely nailed it man with how much potential this fanfiction has I think it will age like wine,and hey when this fanfic finally gets the recognition and famous it absolutely deserves, I'm just hopin' you ain't forgetting about me mate. I think this is it and yeah I know it's fuckin so much but then again is it bad tho? I'll see you in your next post/chapter bye author

@ BOBBY_THE_DOBBERY  but on  the other hand the thing I liked about this fanfiction oh BOY there is a lot for example even though  yes this is literally just counteracted my previous comment about the pacing but I am a fucking LIAR if i say i didn't enjoy mono and seven interaction like it was just so cute and wholesome and GOD IS IT ADORABLE AS FUCK. Another one was on how you portray mono insecurity most of the fandom depiction of him it just his a lil shy and if the mask is taken he was like "bruh" and that why I like your depiction on his insecurity about how he looked I was worried when seven ask mono about the promise he made in the maw to seven about taking his back off because again...the pacing I am so glad when you decide to not reveal it right there in there.
            
            And another this was six I LOVE your depiction of six because the fandom has two sides with her personality traits 1. She is a bitch who just blames everything on mono and thinks she is better than everyone else or 2. She is this weak,soft, crybaby who is always apologizing and can never for the love of god stop acting like mono is the best and pure and strong and everything,but somehow you manage to balance it out she Is not this Cry baby that can't do shit and can actually fight,stand up for herself and sometimes be sassy but she is not a total narcissistic about it. basically I'm in love with your depreciation of six.

@ AveragePadderWatt1  HELL YEAH AUTHOR YOUR DA GOAT

@BOBBY_THE_DOBBERY you all be waiting for me? good thing i got it out now

@ BOBBY_THE_DOBBERY  oh shit it's supposed to be happy man my bad gang