Aviator69
Just a message to Miri. Thanks for the feedback! It helps a bunch. I'll try to fix those mistakes to the best of my ability.
Aviator69
Aviator69
Hey, can anyone read my creepypasta fanfic? I would love some feedback and some tips to make it better.
CaptainJackSparrow22
OMG, your bio looks sooooo cool. I would love to be your friend, gurllllllllllllll.
Aviator69
Gurrl, whatchu talkin' bout? I am just expressing ma feelings and showin peoples who I am. That be it.
MiriFern
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But just look at that word. SHIT. SHIIIT. It looks like Tshi, which is Chinese for "disappointed with the cooking of the duck meat". It's a lame slang word for excrement. You're on a writing site, and you need to show these scrubs that you can do better than that. Say fecal matter instead. It's funny, and makes you sound sophisticated and posh.
MiriFern
Gurrl, you cursin' in your bio? That is very unladylike, missy. Do you want people to think you're some kind of hussy? How dare you disgrace the family name! You have brought shame upon this house! Now, go commit honorable seppuku, before I ground you!