Avni79smile

New devansh story on balveer returns episode 334
          	I just published "GOODBYE BHAIYA" of my story "Balveer ka Rakshak". https://www.wattpad.com/1640978458?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Avni79smile

Dishadoshi104

I don't know what's happening but me latest chapter pe comment hi nahi kar pa rahi hoon aur aisa sirf tumhari profile mein hi hoon raha hai.

Avni79smile

@Dishadoshi104 also do check if you can comment on past chapter or not if no plz tell me 
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Avni79smile

@Dishadoshi104 i republished too check it out if you are able to comment now
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Avni79smile

Hiii. Guys no one can take your place part 5 of devansh is still not completed so offcourse no update of it but today I went to see balveer returns again from episode 1 to feel again connected with that serial and also devansh so I can write their scene properly in part 5 . But got new idea so I will update devansh today. Now I can't stop writing that idea so I will updste that today as no one can take your place will take time as it's quit long and i need to make sure no detail is missing .
          I just published "Naraz vivaan (part1)" of my story "DEVANSH". https://www.wattpad.com/1639424601?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Avni79smile

Dishadoshi104

Hey dear wassup? I wanted to tell you about my idea. That is when meher and manav goes to mumbai and sees dev and goes to bharatnagar and calls him ballu and expresses their happiness that they finally found him and questions him that why he left them? But he has no answer to give. Then montu comes there and announces that he was the one who brought them here and he'll support meher and manav in this. Then trio will insist dev to come with them to their home and vivi will get angry seeing this. He tells the trio that what are you saying and he is dev not some ballu and fights with them and doesn't let them touch debu. Then coming to a conclusion, vivi says that they can stay in bharatnagar for few days and then their mission starts to get their ballu back and tries to find that why their ballu is not recognising them and after facing some hardships gets to know the truth and also meets baalpari and eventually gets to know that debu doesn't want that koi bhi unhe nuksaan pahunchaye and then the whole dagli family arrives there  and has an emotional breakdown seeing him after so many years. So did you like my idea?

Avni79smile

@Dishadoshi104  I have one idea but is it ok with you if I do modification with this plot. First it will be between 2 dimensions and second change i can't otherwise plot will be revealed but because this is your request i want you to approve if I can do modification or not then only I will write otherwise I will think some other way to implement this plot.
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