AvniDesai7

Hi guys, it's been a long time maybe more than a year. There were times I wanted to upload the fanfictions but then I was held back by own academic commitments and then when everything was sorted my grandpa passed away which literally affected me a lot. Then when I finally got over it, my last semester started with so much to do then suddenly lockdown ruined everything. Even though the college was closed , we had video presentations going on and now I have online classes coming soon but I will try to write whenever I get time. Thank you for everyone who has read my fan fictions when I was not here and also for people who are patiently waiting for me to update my fanfictions. 
          	I really wish all of you are safe and taking care of yourself in this situation. I hope we get out of this situation as soon as possible and also pray that people who are working for us are safe and healthy.

Jasminearun

@AvniDesai7 Happy to see you back.I was following your DiRa and rumya ffs.waiting for your updates.missed them
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SandwichLife

Hey!! New reader here. Hope you're doing well, hun! You write brilliantly, bless you! 
          
          I've just binge watched Kaffara and oh boy what a dreamy love story! Not exaggerating but I felt Salar carried the whole show! His character was amazingly sketched and Ali portrayed Salar brilliantly, bless him! Salar is a man of his words and takes accountability for his actions. Ek jagah baitha nahin rehta, har koshish karta hai sab kuch badalne ki and he's a no nonsense person, so icing on the cake! ✨ Sitara k liye he was willing to do all that he could to prove his love.. And boy did he prove himself and how! 
          
          Coming to the last 2 minute ka zabardasti wala conf(u)sion.. bhai kahan ka confession? It felt so rushed and out of the blue ki I felt very bad for Salar and very disconnected from the scene.. very bland to be honest.. it was only worth it because of his passionate yet unbelievably soft- "karti ho mohabbat mujhse? Hogayi na mohabbat mujhse, theek hai maan lete hain hogayi hai mohabbat". Ever since their shaadi, it was only Salar who'd confessed, was set on loving her and earning her love and trust back all the while longing for her confession as well. Shaadi se lekar he bore all her accusations, tantrums, her lack of trust in him and his love, her cold and distant behavior.. even if it was somewhat justified on her part because I completely understand where she's coming from, honest! What else could be expected from her when she's always been only magically eavesdropping on just the wrong times!  I know, I know.. her bad timing and bad luck didn't leave her with a choice either.. contd..

SandwichLife

Pleasure is mine!! ☺️
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AvniDesai7

@SandwichLife thank you so for this
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SandwichLife

@SandwichLife But that excuse of an indirect hint of a confession from her just didn't cut it and made me feel super unworthy and undeserving on behalf of Salar.. bechara pooch kar bhi khud hi jawab dediya k theek hai maan lete hain hogayi hai mohabbat.. wth! Murder k accusation k baad bhi banda khud hi compensate kare Sitara k words ko? Confession toh baad mein woh apology deserve karta hai sab se pehle Sitara se.. yahan toh bas ghair iraadi taur pe yeh keh diya k pehle mohabbat nahin thi na- the freaking hell is her mind at?!   Kahan ka stupid entitlement hai bhai?!  This lack of real emotions from Sitara and the incomplete confession made me want to discover some writing that'd make up for the lack I felt while watching the scene. 
            
            So, I googled some Kaffara ffs to convince myself by reading a desperate yet sensible, loving yet still a passionate confession, worthy of Salar! Which is when I landed on 'Tum jeete hum haare'. I felt so excited because it's been going the way I could easily imagine Salar and Sitara. His reactions, his emotional turmoil at having been so hurt by his only and only love.. oh you're too good and it's been a treat so far! So, thank youuu!  
            
            I've tried posting this comment on your TS a few times but it refuses to send and fails to comment there isliye I had to come here, hope you don't mind?  
            
            Please, please update super soon and frequently and I won't mind it turning to an FF either if it means we get to see some post-confession proper Salar Sitara scenes which we were so brutally deprived off of, after the last episode.. Would you please leave a note on the update? Pretty please?
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