Crystal_Peach1306

Hey avnishta .. I have updated chapter 73...I was waiting for your comment ..did you read it ? I have questions....if you have time you can answer ...
          1. How soon yoongi should tell his feelings to jay
          2. Or do you (as reader) favor both of them to realise it without saying it ? (I prefer this one as writer as I have storyline in mind for it ... proposing is so difficult to write ) 
          3.  I'm gonna introduce whole new phase of story ..where love between them will bloom more and more ... But there will be twist...plot is jealousy and family drama.... So story will be elongated a little in those upcoming chapters.. so do you want yoongi to be clear with his feeling to jay or not in those days ..
           I hope you as read ch 73 and tell me how was it ...
          I know I might be pressuring to you to give me comments... But I really need a reader whom I could talk to so please forgive me 
          I hope I didn't wasted your time 
          Happy reading 
          Crystal

Crystal_Peach1306

@Crystal_Peach1306 thank you...I'll keep your answer in mind .. n move further
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AvnishtaSen4

@Crystal_Peach1306 
            
            Hey Crystal!
            Yes, I’ve read Chapter 73 and I did find it interesting—but at the same time, I feel like the story is kind of staying in the same place. Not much has happened yet, and maybe it’s just me being super eager for updates! I totally understand that you're taking your time and pacing things, and I respect that.
            
            1. Since we’re already at Chapter 73, I honestly think Yoongi shouldn't drag his feelings much longer. It would be better if both he and Jay realized or acknowledged their feelings ASAP. I feel like it’s time for some emotional movement between them.
            
            
            
            That said, I know you already have your storyline in mind and you must be caught up with a lot, so I’ll definitely be waiting for your updates patiently. And no, you didn’t waste my time at all—trust me, I literally wake up and check Wattpad just to see if you’ve updated. I'm really loving the story.
            
            Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!
            
            – Avnishta
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Crystal_Peach1306

Hey avnishta ... Crystal here... I just wanted to ask if you liked the new chapters or not...i was kind of waiting for your comment ... I don't have any reader beside you who engage with me and tell me honest reviews....if you can tell me how you liked the story flow ..I will appreciate it...
          For now I have questions...I hope you don't mind answering...
          Do you think story is slow ? 
          I have plot settled in my plan... Entire story line..
          But recently I felt like my story is slow...
          Do you think it is ? If it is...how will you as reader expected it to move...?
          I'll try to make changes if they are necessary in story line ..
          I hope I don't disturb you ..I just need little help from my reader ... Help me in reviewing this story as reader... I'll be glad 
          Happy reading 
          Crystal

AvnishtaSen4

And yes u should definitely speed up cause I wanna wat happens next
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Crystal_Peach1306

@AvnishtaSen4 thank you ...i will try my best to speed up the pace of story I'm very thankful of your advise
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AvnishtaSen4

@Crystal_Peach1306 I really want for Jay to somehow not intentionally hurt yoongis feeling, then he goes back, and then Jay should release that wat yoongi was trying to do with him. And give him a chance also I want things to progress between them.
            Anyhow u should trust yourself and write it ur way.
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