AvyYve

How's everyone doing? I hope you're all doing fine.
          	
          	I haven't been able to write or even open Wattpad this week as I'm currently focusing on our midterm exams. I'll publish a new chapter of CATSD after our hell weeks are over (pls pray for me), so stay tuned for the continuation of Ella's story! °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°

AvyYve

How's everyone doing? I hope you're all doing fine.
          
          I haven't been able to write or even open Wattpad this week as I'm currently focusing on our midterm exams. I'll publish a new chapter of CATSD after our hell weeks are over (pls pray for me), so stay tuned for the continuation of Ella's story! °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°

AvyYve

Hi! How's everyone's New Year? I hope you've started the year with positivity and love. 
          (´∀`)♡
          
          That aside, I'm currently debating on cutting my chapters short for CATSD (Cinderella and the Seven Dwarves). I just realized each chapter is too long T_T
          
          I've written each chapter with no less than 3k words and I think a more moderate amount of words per chapter (about 1.5k) would be better to keep readers engaged? I think, from a reader's perspective, reading a very long chapter could be boring as it lessens the tension because a lot is already fleshed out in front of them.
          
          What do y'all think? I need some advice, please!

AvyYve

yep! I've just split them all in half. Thank you for the advice cause now I know I did the right decision.
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SignorinaAmi

@AvyYve I think it'd be better to cut them in half, therefore you can keep a reader engaged by strategically dividing the chapters at cliff hangers. It's impressive you are able to write that much, even 2000 words is a achievement to me (though I'm a certified procrastinator).
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Mogitin

Hey thank you for Following, if you ever get a chance I released my first novel recently (Violet Eclipse), I'm currently looking for feedback on this first arc and hope that you and I can become friends as I continue to familiarize myself with this landscape.
          
          Adversely if you have anything to direct me too as far as your own work I'd be happy to take a look.
          
          have an awesome day!

AvyYve

@Mogitin Hi! Sorry for replying so late, but I've started reading Violet Eclipse recently. I'm leaving my feedback on the comments section and I'm currently invested to it.
            
            If you have the time, can you give my book a try too and leave your thoughts about it? It'd really help me to receive feedback for my story. 
            
            Thank you and have a great day!
            
            https://www.wattpad.com/story/375637307-cinderella-and-the-seven-dwarves
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