@Jisabella Hi! It is a very good book! Have a very different perspective, and I liked a lot the way you changed Blaise... the same person, but all grown up! a real adult with a real resposability! and a big one!
I hope you find your inspiration, because I am really enjoying your book, and your "way of writing" (Sorry, I lost my fluency in english a long time ago)
Keep going! You are in the right path!!